Wednesday, December 6, 2006

Mystery Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why do I feel this way
A litlle bit of jealousy some may say
I feel like she should be mine
I'm a grown man, why do I feel like cryin
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Tears From A Soldiers Eyes
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Aasiq the poet 04 August 2007

..great feeling and still greater is the poem..whoever says soldiers cannot write..

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Rebeca Valenzuela 21 January 2007

i loved this poem and its full of love.

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Shanna Stewart 06 December 2006

I love your poem, it almost made me cry. Something that you crave and it's just outside of reach. great job!

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