It forms shapes and puzzles
Which still create a wonder.
Horses and dragons they create,
Puffed up like snow.
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Clouds are really magical.In the poet's eye, like horses, dragon, and snow...haveing tales to say - as you poemed in your work. Beautiful.I enjoyed your piece.
It's a pleasure to hear from you Cizeng. I got the same feel from your poem bubbles
Your poem reminds me of my childhood days..thank you for sharing such a lovely poem
Childhood days are memorable throughout our life. Thanks for reading my poem.
Very unique poems. Perhaps no one had imagined the shape of cloud. Nicely penned. I wonder how did you get such beautiful conception. Wish you all the best. Keep writing.
A good start with a nice poem, Sreelakshmi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
Where do they go, these forms, So mysteriously made? Maybe to the nearby village, Having tales to say. clouds on their ways tell stories of what they have seen. thank u. wonderufl imagination dear poetess. thank u. tony
A good and bold attempt of yours. Please keep on writing. One day you will reach the height of fame in this poetry field. I am now 87 years old and it took more than 50 years to reach this level of writing more than 1800 poems and 25 simple poetry books. Wish you all the best.
Where do they go, these forms, So mysteriously made? Maybe to the nearby village, Having tales to say.... beautiful.
Thanks a lot