Thursday, November 29, 2018

Mystery Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

It forms shapes and puzzles
Which still create a wonder.
Horses and dragons they create,
Puffed up like snow.
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Sreelakshmi Revikumar
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Prabir Gayen 09 March 2019

Where do they go, these forms, So mysteriously made? Maybe to the nearby village, Having tales to say.... beautiful.

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Thanks a lot

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Cigeng Zhang 19 February 2019

Clouds are really magical.In the poet's eye, like horses, dragon, and snow...haveing tales to say - as you poemed in your work. Beautiful.I enjoyed your piece.

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 21 February 2019

It's a pleasure to hear from you Cizeng. I got the same feel from your poem bubbles

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Srijita Mondal 15 February 2019

Your poem reminds me of my childhood days..thank you for sharing such a lovely poem

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 15 February 2019

Childhood days are memorable throughout our life. Thanks for reading my poem.

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Prabir Gayen 13 December 2018

Very good poem on cloud....thanks

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 13 December 2018

Thanks for letting me know

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Ramesh Rai 02 December 2018

Very unique poems. Perhaps no one had imagined the shape of cloud. Nicely penned. I wonder how did you get such beautiful conception. Wish you all the best. Keep writing.

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Sreelakshmi 02 December 2018

Imagination creates wonders. Thanks for your comments

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 December 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Sreelakshmi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 November 2018

Where do they go, these forms, So mysteriously made? Maybe to the nearby village, Having tales to say. clouds on their ways tell stories of what they have seen. thank u. wonderufl imagination dear poetess. thank u. tony

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 30 November 2018

I'm happy to know that you understood the poem

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Rajaram Ramachandran 29 November 2018

A good and bold attempt of yours. Please keep on writing. One day you will reach the height of fame in this poetry field. I am now 87 years old and it took more than 50 years to reach this level of writing more than 1800 poems and 25 simple poetry books. Wish you all the best.

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Sreelakshmi 30 November 2018

Your encouragement is my motivation

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Maravan shelley 29 November 2018

Good one. Shows your powerful feel towards nature.

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Sreelakshmi 30 November 2018

Thanks for your support

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar

Sreelakshmi Revikumar

Kerala, India
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