Sunday, December 21, 2008

Mystery Child Comments

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as i walked through the hospital corridors
i saw this child coming towards ne
her head was shaven and very red.
she looked up and smiled at me
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louis rams
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Amanda Seltrecht 23 December 2008

I love this poem, often times we are faced with life changing things, but we keep on going. Good job keep on writing your great at it.

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Lindsey Ashton 21 December 2008

hear warming story, very good, brought a tear, well written.

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