Friday, December 15, 2006

Mystery Comments

Rating: 4.0

A mystery,
That is what you are to me.
Where you hide when you become unwell,
It must be lonely as hell.
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Leigh Ladd
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Nathan Pait 15 December 2006

Well written. I'm no authority on poetry, but maybe substitute 'unwell' for 'scared, ' that way it will all be the same format.

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