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He entered my life like a breeze on a hot summer day.
Calm. Cool. Refreshing. Unexpected.
For the moment, everything surrounding my presence seemed to cease.
I existed only for the moment.
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You've described love very well. I felt the same way when I met my husband........I think when it's right it's impossible to ignore it. You write with a true passion Sylvia. I enjoy you work very much. I'll watch for more from you! Sincerely, Mary
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7/27/2025 5:03:11 AM # 1.0.0
A nice write Sylvia. I found though that the detail of the narrative almost obscured the question that you ask in those last two lines. Less could be more with this one? A good work though.