Tuesday, July 31, 2018

Mysterious Dusk Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dusk before lunar eclipse dreams
Becoming pink rosy to fill ink,
The tree of hope rises towards,
Welcome song is written in sky,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Rajnish Manga 14 December 2019

Amazing portrayal of a full moon night witnessing a lunar eclipse, coming out of it and presenting a surreal scene from earth to sky with resplendent colours and shades.. Thanks for this wonderful treat.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 September 2019

" Welcome song is written in the sky" ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Captain Cur 02 August 2018

Beautiful description of dusk, that special mysterious part of evening just before darkness. Great word choice, vivid colors and expressions permeate your poem, like a colorful abstract viewed through the eyes of God and man.. Absolutely Wonderful write!

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Irfanulla Shariff 02 August 2018

Yes indeed, magical dusk is painted by clouds and joy.....Lovely imagery. Beautifully presented. Thanks for sharing, Kumarmani......10.

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Unwritten Soul 01 August 2018

Such a rosy colored poem, it has some beautiful theme, your language of narrating... Soft n calm

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Valsa George 01 August 2018

'This red-pink-golden-orange veil again, '................ how well this line and the beautiful image you have captured match! This poem gives a glimpse of the colorful twilight sky! Great write!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 July 2018

A keen observation of nature's beauty and wonders linking God's mysteries has been made into a magnificent poem. Beautifully crafted with superb imagery. I concur to the comments of Father Kostas. A profound piece of work worthy of 10++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 31 July 2018

celestially very beautiful dusk and lunar eclipse u depict

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Susan Williams 31 July 2018

Lovely lovely phrasing to celebrate God's universe and its ways. Mysterious Dusk captured the feelings that eclipses engender in us! Well done, my friend, very well done! 10++++

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Kostas Lagos 31 July 2018

There is a kind of calmness in your poems. This one is among your top ones.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 July 2018

A magnificent piece of work! Thanks for sharing.............10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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