Thursday, August 26, 2021

Mysterious Door ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Whenever I pass by, I always see that door remains closed
I kept passing by in hope that someday I shall see it open.

Everybody saw my patience and perseverance
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M. Asim Nehal
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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2021

After having read 7 couplets, the door remains closed and with it its secret behind! 5 Stars full

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Mamta S 27 August 2021

Tremendious write, Asimji.

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Martinez Salotori 26 August 2021

I liked the suspense, v r puppet in the hands of fate afterall.

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S H 26 August 2021

We all go thru this: Its mystery kept motivating and encouraging every time, And I kept my hope alive without doubting any time.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 26 August 2021

Wonderful philosophy...With all mystery, now I wish everyone to get a similar door, That remains closed and the secret behind it remains intact.

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Indira Renganathan 26 August 2021

What is the secret behind that door....Revelation is hard to get for many....inspiring work...5*****

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Deepak S S 26 August 2021

I see a great philosophy of life in your poem, the doors of death remains close till the very end and no one know where they go passing the doors of life. Salute for this poem.5****

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Michael Jack 26 August 2021

Wonderful poem, high on philosophy and you kept secrecy till the very end and even after it.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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