Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Mysterious Depth Comments

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hang a lantern
aloft in the soft moist
travelers hasten toward sea
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Indira Renganathan 31 May 2009

Thanks a lot dear Ahmed for your great opinion about me....am I really so...I am just an ordinary common woman, a grand-mother, old enough, just trying out with the once little learnt English.. some forty years ago...your poem above is wonderful giving a scenic picture...congratulations....thanks again

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Merna Ibrahim 22 May 2009

great poem and a great title too...you are right, those peoples' life is always in danger.....I appreciate your appreciation to the poets on poemhunter....well done

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Joseph Poewhit 21 May 2009

I would edit the S from feels to feel. Give's it a better flow.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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