Tuesday, August 19, 2014

Mysteries Of Life Comments

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Life is our Teacher
We are its Students,
Everyday is a learning phase
Every moment we have to embrace.
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Valsa George 20 August 2014

A lovely poem Kavya! Life teaches us many lessons and as we grow, we come to realize that many of our earlier notions were just whimsical! I have one suggestion.... instead of Mysteries...., you could have titled the poem Lessons Learnt.... Lesson 1,2 and...so on!

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Dinesan Madathil 19 August 2014

Mysteries in life are many and you have given the traces of a few of them. It is a write that needs to be annexed with a few more poems of the kind as you are going to come across some more mysteries

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 19 August 2014

a lovely write that inspires.

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