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I DON'T ASK FOR MUCH/ ALL I ASK IS A HEART OF COURAGE AND LOVE... These wonderful lines reflect inner beauty. (May it unfold and show itself!) The Muse of Poetry will smile on someone who thinks as you do. The gifts of the Muse usually come with gifts in other areas of life.

all I want is a heart. good..........

all I want is a heart /of courage and love.. love and support in life and life's actions.. it is a self expression and self revealing poem. thank you

Thank you guys for the piece of advice. hmmmm its just sometimes i feel down that i am inspired to write this kind of poem. Its just my first time to be in this site and i think i'll be visiting this more often. I also love to read your poems and im sure ill learn a lot from them.

Great self-reflection, using others as a mirror to figure things out! Learning to trust yourself is the first step to achieving your dreams in spite of turmoil in life. In order to be able to tell the truth, you must first acknowledge it in yourself! Always be who you are and you will never be wrong, never fail, because you have stood up for yourself, alone! Great poem, loved it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Hi Cherry. Thanks for your poem. By all means, be you. It's okay to live simply and be happy at it. It's also okay to ask 'for more'. We have not because we ask not. Keep reaching for the star you want to land on. If you fail to reach your star, you will land on another one near by. Failure in many respects is just another way of saying, Start Over. GBU. Curtis.

nicely written..liked much

A poignant poem, Cherry. Everyone has the right to be themselves.