Monday, July 6, 2009

Myself Comments

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MYSELF

I saw myself
lying in the green grass
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Christian Crisostomo
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Danny H 17 July 2009

The flow of your poetry is easing and soothing but at the same time shows your hidden distress and pain my favorite verse was It seems that in my eyes, everything is black. The flowers, water, air, and everything are turning into black pearls beneath the deepest ocean towards infinity. the imagery and the great sorrow filled words, are filled with much knoledge of who you are

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Lady Grace 11 July 2009

yourself is none other than you all you have in outside reflects in your inside dear don't hate yourself...you can drive your life well don; t lost hope...that; s necessity for a good start... your poem is so nice everybody likes this i'm sure let your words flow naturally in the poetry you want to introduce... we will accept your invitation always just remind me to read in behalf of poemhunter family i welcome you as a member of this family..grace

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Christian Crisostomo

infanta, Quezon, Philippines
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