Myself Comments

You certainly have a special way with words. You have some powerful lines that make you read for more. Nice. DC

Man! you're good! really good! And am proud coz you're a Filipino. Keep writing, will keep reading.

a very descriptibe poem well done its a very good read very enjoyable. keep writing. kizzy

A nice flow to this piece Juneil, we all strive to be better people, well penned, 10 Lynda xxx

so humble describing urself thru poetic lines....''urself'' s the best gift given to u..take care of urselfjuneil.. cheers naizz

I really like this poem I think that we all strive to be the best the we can be. But often times we wonder if it is enough and we try to be someone we are not. Keep writing your great at it.

great piece....inspiring full of ambition...determination and self confidence and....you're a good poet....

ambitious with determination..keep the dream and dream..nothing's wrong with it.. you'll never know..that dream of yours will come true..nice write of self determination...10

you're good at describing yourself, dude.. but, I think there must be some parts that you haven't included.. nice piece, bro..

Know thyself. Thats the way you discover yourself. Very good poem.

Now this is good poetic prose and from the choice of title to the end line it grabs the attention with it's honesty - - - - I like the imagery and the flow of line - - - more like this please........10 from Fay.

WOW., wala akong ibang masabi kundi WOW., grabe ito ibang klase., parang ganyan ang sarili ko kung minsan., 'Hopeless vagabond in the eyes of men, Poor man trying to make a name, Unheard though voice is amplified, The only thing I have is pride.'