Wednesday, January 6, 2016

Myrrh Of My Life (Haiku-Senryu) Comments

Rating: 4.8

You came in my dream
sprinkling me almond flowers,
you, myrrh of my life.
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Panayiota (Julie) Tsorou
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Dr Antony Theodore 07 January 2016

A very good combination of words and a great Haiku. you, myrrh of my life. very nice. your photo is also very nice. thank you.tony

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Sofia Kioroglou 07 January 2016

Exquisite! Nice haiku!

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What a perfect combination of words, referring to three major themes: Love, Nature and Dream. Using only 14, you have covered a wide spectrum of human feelings, and of pure love! ! A Great Haiku-Senryu poem!

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