Friday, November 10, 2017

Myriad Sad Songs-05: The Mist Of Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

The shawl of Winter mist
clads the yellow innerwear
the vast expanse of
gold fragrance
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Alina Kaikeyi 16 December 2017

Wisps of winged cloud start soaping the soft fair nude skin of the lady mountain surge a fire of urge in the nuptial bed Lovely poem shared. 10++

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 24 November 2017

Wisps of winged cloud start soaping the soft fair nude skin of the lady mountain surge a fire of urge in the nuptial bed spread over tons and tons of mustard flowers. Thank you for sharing a heart broking poem10+++++++++++++

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soumya 24 November 2017

Wisps of winged cloud start soaping the soft fair nude skin of the lady mountain surge a fire of urge in the nuptial bed spread over tons and tons of mustard flowers. Beautiful lines.Thanks for shared10+++++

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Rajendra Rout 12 November 2017

Wisps of winged cloud start soaping the soft fair nude skin of the lady mountain surge a fire of urge in the nuptial bed spread over tons and tons of mustard flowers.beautiful line shairing..10+++++

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Binayakumar Mohanty 12 November 2017

Nude skin of lady mountain Surge a power of urge.what to write more.I feell reading Manikarnika and dwasuparna Second time.No way less powerful feelings.I would like to read again and again.you are unique in the site sir.open challenge to others who......Thanks for sharing

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 November 2017

Why stopped after the who? Felt like at the Xavier's? Thank you sir, my dearest for the napkin of love and affection you rain over my ant-hill-heart.

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Prativa Rani 11 November 2017

Loved the beautiful line... surge a fire of urge in the nuptial bed spread over tons and tons of mustard flowers. Wow, what a lovely poem Sir. 10 for it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2017

Winter mist provokes thought and sadness is expressed here..10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 November 2017

Thanks a lot for the kind words of inspiration.

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