Monday, October 9, 2017

Myriad Sad Songs-02: The Disappearance Comments

Rating: 5.0

As your round moon face

Bent over bluish water
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Soumya Ranjan Rout 24 November 2017

With the mask of A nighty bird Singing to Its own echoing self, With the breath of The immobile animal face Growing stiff with blueness With the enormous Muteness of stone, The pale reflection Of the fallen angel from The western sky Disappeared into the Otherness of the other. Nice thought.Beautiful presentation 10+++++++

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Prativa Rani 11 November 2017

The pale reflection Of the fallen angel from The western sky Disappeared into the Otherness of the other. Loved this line so much...the otherness of the other.

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Suratha Kumar Rout 04 November 2017

With the enormous Muteness of stone, The pale reflection Of the fallen angel from The western sky Disappeared into the Otherness of the other. Lovely sharing. 10+++++

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Alina Kaikeyi 11 October 2017

With the mask of A nighty bird Singing to Its own echoing self, Lovely line..quite great read. 10+++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 10 October 2017

The pale reflection Of the fallen angel from The western sky Disappeared into the Otherness of the other. Great poem.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 10 October 2017

The western sky Disappeared into the Otherness of the other. Beautiful expression. Thanks poet. 10 for it.

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