Thursday, November 26, 2020

Myre's Mire Comments

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they wanted my eyes
they wanted to see what I had seen
they longed to see what I had seen
to know how I laid bare my step
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Clive Culverhouse
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Clive Culverhouse 28 November 2020

this is one of my poems on the Write Out Loud poetry website this poem got a number of likes and a comment says " A beautiful, memorable poem."

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 November 2020

they wanted my eyes they wanted to see what I had seen and all the creatures they'd become could walk, as I, elated //// yeah, " Myre's Mire" - this poem lead me to a nightmare's conversation and struggle; amazing writings

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Clive Culverhouse 28 November 2020

thanks for commenting on my poem Myre's Mire glad you liked it., ,

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