Friday, August 2, 2019

Myfanwy Comments

Rating: 5.0

My dream was once Myfanwy
Whose blush no more appears
Whenever I draw near.
Just like the full moon waxing,
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Tom Billsborough
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Bri Edwards 20 September 2019

i see Poet's Notes, but here: " Myfanwy (Welsh: [məˈvɑːnʊɨ]; a woman's name derived from Welsh annwyl, meaning 'beloved') is a popular Welsh song" OR did you mean " Myfanny" ? ? IF her gaze is " serene" , she MUST be looking beyond YOU! ! ! " As though she looks" could also be " Although she looks" . to MyPoemList. bri :)

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tom billsborough 21 September 2019

You're quite right, Bri. Although on reflection " my " would have been a juicier title. You never know. One might appear if I can get it past the censors! Sorry I haven; t answered your messages. I've been away working. That makes a change from Gin and Tonics and doing F.. all! Will catch up with you over the weekend, honest!

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Jane Campion 02 August 2019

Turning love to face the opposite direction is exquisitely presented by a poet of note. My highest praise, dear Tom.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 August 2019

A lovely poem, sir Tom....10+++

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Tom Billsborough

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