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Here I am a young new teen.
All my friends, they are so keen.
They give me dope every day.
I'll take more, it is the cool way.
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A deep sad poem. Excelent work! I like the way that you write my friend. Regards.
Hah? In the end the boy was dead? So sad, , Only have a short live, , But this is very nice poem, hehehe... Love it, , ,
Powerful words Joe...a true reflection of modern life...thank you...Fi
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8/24/2025 9:50:47 PM # 1.0.0
Really strong writing Joe. That's life for many teens now. Thanks for your comment on mine. Karin Anderson