Saturday, July 11, 2009

My Young Brothers Comments

Rating: 5.0

young brother young brother i see we are close to cross that mountain, no matter your age orgin or color, or creed. i consider you my young brothers, giving, the time...
young brother young brother as generation evaluation, we all need a helping hand, can we see to have peace, i know im just of coming, but seeing this horror made me write for kin,
dear brother my brother words are all we can share, by that can we nurture to make peace,
i am not that of, of a man lacking wood, but would you like to hear my full story?
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 February 2010

i rated this one 10 but i think the poem deserves more than if only this will be arranged in verses/stanzas.... nice poem!

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