Thursday, January 27, 2011

My Worlds Comments

Rating: 5.0

In my small world
Urgency is not priority
Troublesome, why hurry?
Have some coffee and poetry
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Ibnu Din Assingkiri
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Mohammed Albalushi 14 February 2011

fantastic, i like the way u compear between samll n big words using smiple words with big meanings, get to the core of the poem.

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Mohammad Muzzammil 01 February 2011

I like your small world rather than big one. The language that you have used is very simple but it holds a great message. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

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The simple complexity of a world that is both small and Large. Well done my friend!

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri

Ibnu Din Assingkiri

Singkir Laut, Kedah, Malaysia
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