Wednesday, September 9, 2020
My World Is You Comments
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The world you made for me
Is truly safe and secure
Something shines in
And nothing fades
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Deluke Muwanigwa
09 September 2020
Nice one. May i suggest your last two lines in the last verse appear at the end of the other two verses to act as a draw card to your poem. I think
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8/9/2025 2:20:40 PM # 1.0.0
Write comment. Beautiful poetry, dear poet! It reminds me: Tum hamaare liey ham tumhaare liey, Phir zamaane ka kya hai hamaara na ho. Thanks for sharing.