Friend, I don't know where I am
I am a diamond, a pearl, no, it is obvious
I collide in the vein with desires
I am an empty house
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Shakira, Desires, jewels in an empty house, scattered petals, stars, galaxy, your World Is So Beautiful. QtR
Beautifully painted one.... I liked the lovely presentation.... Stay safe pc
We often feel a need to identify with something. What we identify with becomes like a container we pour ourselves into, but eventually we will overflow it. There comes a time when we identify with open spaces, and if we are looking for each other, we will find each other there. Your lyrical language honors our feelings.
So beautiful. Nicely expressed, especially. It could be enclosed in a Valentine's Day card.
I see you are a very good natural poetess... Nice reading you and thanks for your lovely comments on my MOM'S SMILES GENUINE POEM THE WHOLE ACTUAL TRUTH only those who loved their moms can realise it Thanks again ma'am
Amazing poem, so beautifully worded, dear poetess Shaikra. A fascinating profession you have, and like you I have lost my dear Mother. So true imaginable Your World is so Beautiful.5 Stars for your impressive poem. To MyPoemList The picture you added here is tremendous magical. Keep creating, dear Poetess, you write so poetic.