Wednesday, February 1, 2017

My World Comments

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my world is not the same
my house destroyed by time
my body weak and tired
at least I have my rhyme
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Barry Middleton
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Dimitrios Galanis 01 February 2017

The vanity stressed by the last two verses though functioning as a philosophical irony and making the whole piece a truthness sub specie eternitatis? ignore the most precious value of this life which is its joyrney we have to make as born in this world beings. And this journey is worth to be experienced, doesn't it?

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Barry Middleton 01 February 2017

Worth being experienced and worth fighting for. Which is often difficult.

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