My World Comments

A heart touching penning. Beloved may be physically not present now, but all those sweet memories of love persists afresh and that is th true love. . Thanks for sharing

You were in hurry had to get along. You entered my world. Very much expressive and heart touchable excellent poem.

Niee poem....10 Left behind world ukind for me to find not as a blind

Short, sweet, straight to the point. Enjoyed. :)

A beautiful poem portraying the entry and exit of a beloved which still persists in memories and cherished by the poet.Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

great poem on love dwelling in life..........greatly enjoyed it........thanks

Like a flash in a pan., Such contacts or relationship leaves us gasping for more. Great write! Thanks for sharing

Love the sentiment expressed in the poem, and the last stanza is the 'cherry on the cake'! Great write!

Commemorates a relationship that has been sweet, but didn't last long! But its delightful memories still linger! Cute little poem marked by deep feelings!

Poem with the sorrow contrast - remaining a memory I still sing our song, tears full eyes yet smile on face, and I must say- tears of the night or pearls of the day! , Woes of the heart or dancing feathers gay! Thank you Heather

Beautiful poem. Very true said, beautiful things that happened in past, remains in our sweet memories forever. Loved reading it.

Very nicely composed....the world made of sweet memory........very nice

all happened remain as a memory....................beautiful...................