My World Comments

I like this, Kelvin, how you define your world with the character you and the determination not to stop defining and loving...

A fusion of emotion and freedom, telling all from heart with one intention, such a good one for a good write..keep it up_Unwritten Soul

wow.too philosophical.that's the nice one i've ever read. tnx

wonderful lines.. Reminding of immortal words of. 1. By Rabindranath Tagore, Faith is that bird, sing much before the dawn, 2.Rumi There is plane above good and bad, I will meet you there, 3. Nisargadatta maharaj Knowledge says I am nothing, Love says I am everything, Between my life flows! Thank you!

I like this Kelvin, the focus on the as your world and that around this person in the poem your thoughts and heart are captured.

I like this poem. I like that you convey that you're mind is messed up and you have doubts about moving foward, but you still won't stop.

Totally get your anguish and pain! Feelings transcend beyond culture, beliefs, conditioning etc! We feel them There fore they are not invisible. We have to deal with them, but try to cause the least pain for everyone involved, including ourselves!

short great poem. keep it up

Very well, this is so nice, especially the meaning well done.!