Sunday, October 19, 2014

My World Comments

Rating: 5.0

Being talkative during friend meetings
was my characteristic
Until I started to move myself apart from them
I think too much to myself in the dark
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Sahra Hussein
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Shakil Ahmed 19 October 2014

very nice poem, beautiful thoughts and easy but melodious language. please read my poems and give your comment.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 October 2014

To be talkative is not bad but the topics chosen, place and time really carries the meaning.. I am talkative yet those don't know me they complain against me of not being talkative..when you watch TV NEWS gathering cloud is so heavy to rain that you rain giving pain..talkativeness is good but meddling is bad..I don't pock my nose that is of thumb length..nice poem good very good 10

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