Saturday, November 4, 2017

My World: 03- The Kids Of Society Comments

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When a kid

Jumps off her belly
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Suratha Kumar Rout
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Mihaela Pirjol 17 February 2018

I like the way you have written this poem: the association between mother in the first stanza, and the government in the second stanza, is great.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 19 January 2018

In fact motherhood is never expected from these Putana like leaders.Nice poem.A big 10

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Rajendra Rout 13 November 2017

But these leaders Never want to be a mother Of these kids, Their subjects, These people.i enjoy this line.thanks for shairing...10+++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 November 2017

Wow, a beautiful write. Thanks for the sharing.

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Rajendra Rout 07 May 2018

I agree with you sir.lt is a great poem

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 04 November 2017

But these leaders Never want to be a mother Of these kids, Their subjects, These people. A highly sensible poem. Thanks for the sharing. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 November 2017

I agree with you Ranjan Sir, it's so lovely a poem.

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