My Words Wont Stay Comments

your words are engraved on my memoryl! ! ! well penned! ! ! your words are very imaginative and their effect touch my soul! ! ! 10/10

ur words will always stay in ur heart no matter wht is unless u forge it kept it up 10++

your words will always stay however deep the meaning is -10 anjali

'The traffic only goes one way'? ? ? I don't understand. What is traffic doing in your poem? Maybe I don't understand what you are trying to get across, but traffic is out of place here. Water, sand, stones, and then boom! Traffic. I see and hear cars and trucks, highways and roads. Can you find another word to mean what you want? Or not? You asked me to give you my opinion. :) DC

Is that lacking confidence? ...wish and pray for you....10++