Wednesday, July 16, 2008

My Words Kissed You And Lied. Comments

Rating: 2.8

Lord do grant her peace of heart:
Needs she not a 'he'.
Guide her heart to your delight;
Just guide it far from me.
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Kyle Shield Laster
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Seairra Kyger 17 December 2009

i really enjoy your poems they are a tad short tho try combinding your poems or just continue running with that single idea it feels like i walked in on a story but only got to hear part of it just enough to really really grabb my attention

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Kesav Easwaran 16 July 2008

just eight lines...but the impact they bring out is umpteenth times powerful in poetic ways...you both need only peace...oh! Lord, listen please...10

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Kyle Shield Laster

Kyle Shield Laster

Clarksdale, Mississippi
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