My Words Poem by DM W

My Words

Rating: 5.0


My words search for meaning,
But they become lost in the haze of memory,
And modern distractions. I try to focus hard
And gradually retrieve fragments of truth,
From black clouds of despair, and from
The circuitry of conventional machinery.

Tuesday, August 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: distraction,modern,words
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 17 August 2020

There's too much of everything out there, it's simply overkill excess. We're deluded and spoilt for choice be it modern gadgets to the multiple choice of different cat foods on supermarket shelves. While people out there in this 21st Century modern human age are still starving to death. I'm an advocate of hope Dominic and common sense will one day prevail and build upwards from as you say 'fragments of truth'. A full score and thank you for a poem to make one think

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Sachidananda Panda 11 August 2020

" My words search for meaning, But they become lost in the haze of memory, And modern distractions...." Beautiful expression... it often happens to one and all... distractions play devils... yet are inevitable occurrences in life... thanks

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