Friday, August 4, 2006

My Wondering Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

i wish to cross the lines
to ask
who is dead, who is alive?
can i find a light
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tara mahdavi
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Catastrophe King 09 August 2006

Yes... indeed! This is an amazing piece of work. So beautifully written.. Full rank... the poem carries you along in thoughts and mind.....

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Sean North 07 August 2006

you are the angel to fly, the bird to sing, the sun to shine, Tara..plus you write cool stuff...

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