Thursday, April 16, 2015

My Woman Comments

Rating: 5.0

How sweet is the salt of the earth, Oh Skies!
The world is a lie but I love its lies.
Canals of honey may be tasty and nice,
how can I pay its too high price!
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Chinedu Dike 08 June 2017

Awesome tribute to your love in rich flow of thought. Good usage of imagery throughout. Thanks for sharing.

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Hazel Durham 10 June 2015

Such beautiful imagery and inspired lines, an amazing tribute to your woman!

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Valsa George 18 April 2015

My woman in herself is a wine of splendor, I know fairies of your garden are charming, My woman is both, cooling and warming What more is needed to make her happy and proud! A great encomium to your sweet heart!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 April 2015

Wonderful imagery. Nicely and aptly penned. Thanks a lot.

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