in these lonely summer nights
i occasionally place my bed
in the uppermost floor of my simple abode
it is directly underneath the skies
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nice poem....... well line and verse in to poem. i like reading it.......keep up your good work...... successful will come on your soon...... God bless you alway
i admire the simile employed for the beloved disappearance.10 marks. shan
When longing fills the being.....when time is still in slow motion..... the thread of thoughts.....a joy to read....
Home sick per chance Ariel I think we all suffer from this but I love your poem.tttTTTTTen
lovely write..a desperation verses for your love one you longing for...great... Ency Bearis
nice poem....... well line and verse in to poem. i like reading it.......keep up your good work...... successful will come on your soon...... God bless you alway