Thursday, August 21, 2008

My Wish (To Honduras With Love Vi) Comments

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in these lonely summer nights
i occasionally place my bed
in the uppermost floor of my simple abode
it is directly underneath the skies
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Ayi Escalona
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Ezna Stephna 10 November 2009

nice poem....... well line and verse in to poem. i like reading it.......keep up your good work...... successful will come on your soon...... God bless you alway

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Ezna Stephna 10 November 2009

nice poem....... well line and verse in to poem. i like reading it.......keep up your good work...... successful will come on your soon...... God bless you alway

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 26 October 2009

i admire the simile employed for the beloved disappearance.10 marks. shan

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Malini Kadir 15 July 2009

When longing fills the being.....when time is still in slow motion..... the thread of thoughts.....a joy to read....

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Patrick A. Martin 15 July 2009

Home sick per chance Ariel I think we all suffer from this but I love your poem.tttTTTTTen

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Ency Bearis 21 August 2008

lovely write..a desperation verses for your love one you longing for...great... Ency Bearis

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