My Wish To Fly Comments

You're absolutely awesome with words. This piece wonderful lines. :)

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. A poignant bit of verse elegantly brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing, Queeny.

You have a glorious and beautiful reason to fly high. Remain flying. Remain high. Remain blessed Queeny. Beautifully conversing poem 10/10

Having ambition in life is great. Such desire motivates mind and allows a person to grow much. Revisiting this poem I feel glad really.

Surely, I too had that wish! Wanting to be superheroes-hero! Glad that you too had such wish! Thanks for sharing!

Nice way to eradicate evil and evil doers from the society....Well thought

I would fly high in the sky. Not just for the joy of flying, ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! But: to trace the hypocrites in the society And remove the sheep cloth out of leopards, ....nice ideology. Beautiful theme. Dear Gona, your commitment to make a swindlersless society is acceptable. Thank u for sharing the gem with us.10

wish you fly in the sky

a poem full of good intent which if taken on board would make our world better? .............well written

excellent beautiful but a small edit may be If I (have! ! ! ! !) I am given a wish! may be better young kid you have poetry in your veins I can see it keep at it

Hypocrites are everywhere but difficult to find them unless the crisis grows to such an extent. To find out them the poet have a solemn wish to fly. Good imagination.

Well written..let your wish come true

High thoughts, high aims finally materialize. Flying not just for pleasure or for a sense of freedom but to achieve a great end like reforming a society. My best wishes. A thought-provoking write. Congrats.

Loaded with lovely longings for a laudable life of both truth and transparency. Well done my friend!

remove the sheep cloth out of leopards - great expression! Nice poem! Keep writing!

To dream along with the joy of your heart! With hope and faith. Nice work.

Very commendable desire but quite difficult to accomplish. As a poem it is enjoyable. Thanks for sharing. Ten points.

The poem shows your commitment to remove all ills afflicting the society. Amazing poem. Thanks.

Dreams are part of life. Nice work.

Nice thought.Wish I could fly with you.