Monday, January 21, 2008

My Wish For You Comments

Rating: 5.0

A shooting star
Streaking across the sky,
When I saw it,
I made a wish of my desire.
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Heather Rhoden
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Catastrophe King 21 January 2008

That was smoothly flowing poetry..... very imaginative and thoughtful...

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Howard Johnson 21 January 2008

Very nice and well thought out.Beautiful rhyming stanza-s, Heather, All the best to you..

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