Tuesday, May 19, 2009

My Wish Comments

Rating: 4.0

I lie on the ground,
and stare into space.
The stars start to move
Into the shape of your face,
...
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Heather Glanzer
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Anjali Sinha 19 June 2009

awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! I simply luvvvvvvvvvvv vit! ! ! ! !

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Kevin Fisher 20 May 2009

I love it everyone has a dream or something they wish for, you just have to go out and find it :)

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Jack Price 19 May 2009

Real Good poem with good imagery, I love the line: We're walking the shoreline With our feet getting wet.... Good job keep on writing!

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