My Wish Comments

nice and lovely! nicely penned.....

very sweet well done

cute simple..........

Sweet and cute verse. Love it.

this is so sweet, cute and funny all at once i love it

nice love poem...................

awww thats a sweet poem britt

Oh I just love it Brittany! Tenderness and sweet, sweet love. A very romantic thing. Gw62

Budding promise keep writing......

aww, very touching! I love the way you write!

Very nice poem. Keep writing for I can see you got the heart and mind to write beautiful poetry. thanks and best wishes, melvin

Ah, not to be apart is a very deep wish alot want.: (Unfortuantly it doesn't always come true.

very cute

what there is of ths works really well, Brittany! but there's not yet ough to sustain the poem - aim to develop with 2 more stanzas using the same rhythm - or variations from it. I think y've got an excellent ear for syllabic poetry - and i also like the way y're able to combine a concern with crafting with powerful emotions. DIM

i love them all and i love you

I think its pretty good.

Brittany, do you mean to write the following? 'sighing for relief' as line 3