Tuesday, April 3, 2012

My Wish Comments

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The past is now gone
The future lies ahead.

But I can't seem to move forward
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Serena Taylor
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Sharad Juneja 23 April 2012

Wow must say a very sweet cute n beautiful way of describing ur desire to be with him..very nice

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Sally Plumb Plumb 23 April 2012

Nice piece.

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Liliana Roman 04 April 2012

don't let people pull you away from the ones you love. make those people see who that person really is and make them see that they shouldn't be pulling you away. love is a game of tug of war that is either lost or won.

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Liliana Roman 04 April 2012

this sounds like romeo and juliet. but never give up. help them see who that person really is and that you love them with all your heart.

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Chidori Storm 03 April 2012

Keep wishing. Never give up on love. Keep writin. Love the poem.

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Rhiscx The Final Burden 03 April 2012

This is magical. A tug of war inside pitting your heart and mind. Wanting release and captivity. An emotional burden. Or a passionate gift. A wish...to come true, or to deny.

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