My Wings Comments

After your denial I was overwhelmed, Now my days are not cut short, but my wings are pinioned. Meanings bloom in the mortal wings of a butterfly; With the intensity of stars, stay awake villages of the great sky. - A caterpillar has now transformed into a butterfly on whose wings meanings bloom, and thanks to the denials that were instrumental in bringing the change.

contd she knows so like a butterfly she goes into the dungeons of darkness our minds suppose but she knows the grief that within us shall like compost grow and now we also know why did she go to make us live in her memory all along what do you poets suppose

You have the essence of a lover poet the fragrance of a Rose yet in one's life memories one can't dispose in the garbage bin of time we all suppose it still lingers in our minds why she left so much a heavy weight that none can bear to forget her is a hazardous task she knows pt 2....

Meanings bloom in the mortal wings of a butterfly; With the intensity of stars, stay awake villages of the great sky. Among the meanings of money, love will always fade..................i do not like not to care...........your brain works wonderfully to present such images in a very creative manner. lovely poem.. tony

A thought provoking poem beautifully crafted. There are times when the rejection that we got in life fuels us to soar. Our failures are sometimes our wings to fly to distant places and at times we can even claim the sky. A great piece full of wisdom.10

Sometimes, though painfully, life helps us to use our wings, to fly to different realms which most of the time, lie dormant in the depths of our own souls.

After your denial I was overwhelmed, Now my days are not cut short, but my wings are pinioned. Great poem!

Lovely lines that are loaded with love. Well done my friend!

Through self wings you can knock at sky for trillion times. An amazing essence is transferred through this brilliant poem. Meanings bloom in the mortal wings of a butterfly. A brilliantly penned poem is shared here...10

To fly after rejection you need no protection. The last line is beautifully expressed as only a poet can.+++10 Robert

Great work... just carry on sir.

This is a beautiful poem on love and life having haunting expression and nice collocation. Thanks for sharing.