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Nice piece, but watch your lines and don't put more words in than is needed. Could do a bit of 'spelling check' before you post onto the site too. This is good advice, not criticism. I like your style. I enjoyed the read a lot. Love Ernestine XXX

This is about your talent and the ability to ryme and comunicate and to inspire thought, Thoughtful piece

A beautiful imagery and nice observation you have here PHIL...repeatition of words made sense and finely put...Thanks...10