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This is a very interesting poem. It leaves you hanging till the end. I like the structure very much. It kind of leads you on a circular path. This can confuse a reader if the pieces seem to be scattered. That is how they appear in this poem. Somewhat scattered. I am left with several questions. This makes the poem a bit of a mystery. Even with the clarity at the end. GW62

A Sad poem but very beautiful in context.Please dont stop your writing you, I think have good writing ability.