My Will Comments

Oh it really grab my heart from falling...That is so sincere and original...How lucky your children to have nice family and be loved, i met some pots here had a family crisis and look suffering so much with unstable life, hope they will taste the same sweetness when read this...The sincerity always make a best value outcomes! and u prove it friend...

i know that ive already left a comment here.....but i just wanted you to know that ive wrote down the last couple senteces of your poem and put it on my desk to read everyday! ! ! its a constant reminder to me whats TRUELY important in life.....and you summed it up the best in your write! ! ! so i thank you from the bottom of my heart! ! ! ! Brian~

giving your children love care and a sense of values outweighs material things Bonnie My three are scattered far and wide but we keep in touch by letter e mail and an occasional visit.They are all succesful and well provided for.Three reasons to be proud Beinga Mom is perhaps the most important task in the world.Being a Dad is not far behind

Bonnie have to agree with Doc, a wonderful tribute to your children...being a mom of two precious gems also and a few moves under our belt...it's not where we are or the material things but the times shared and the love given and received. Diane

very nicely written....love the ending....and when life is boiled down to its most simplest of forms.....its really not what you DO in life.....its what you leave behind....and leaving two beautiful children behind in the world truly is the most precious gem you can leave........very nice write! ! enjoyed it very much! ! ! Brian

Wow, very nicely written... This is a gorgous poem... I hope your kids understand what your trying to say...