Wednesday, January 27, 2016

My Wife, In Love And Caring Comments

Rating: 5.0



Those deep etched lines upon her face
Have been incised by love and caring.
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Lynn W. Petty
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Chinedu Dike 12 June 2017

Beautiful and passionate piece of poetry embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A lovely tribute to a loving wife. Remain blessed Lynn.

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Bri Edwards 11 June 2017

favorite sentence: I stand declaring, Those deep etched lines upon her face Have been incised by love and caring. bri :) i don't 'know' triolet. i did know a Violet. no, she was a Fern, come to think of it. i don't think i care for triolet form, but i suppose you produced it faithfully.

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Mj Lemon 27 January 2016

Absolutely magnificent! really enjoyed this poem.

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Lynn W. Petty

Lynn W. Petty

Newport Beach, California
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