My Wife Became A Mermaid & Promptly Swam Away Comments
She was born on the east coast of Japan, bordered by an Ocean.
She'd eaten plenty of Seafood, some raw, ......which she called Sushi.
And she was an accomplished Swimmer & often Swam in a pool, BUT
......it never dawned on me how CLOSE she might have felt/been to the 'Sea'.
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Geeta, thanks for your multiple comments. : ) bri Keep up the good work, TT. Hee hee!
Enjoyed reading your poem, dear friend Bri. it was very refreshing and absorbing too.
This is a very imaginative tale with a sad ending. It was like reading fairy tale story. Your wife's presence in the story made it interesting and sentimental too.
A very interesting and entertaining poem. Nice to know that some parts of your poem were inspired by your wife. Well crafted write.
Thanks for your reading and comment, Rose Marie. I was inspired before by my wife, but its title was similar to Don't Ever Call Your Wife Hitler. ; (
Not good to think that way even in dreams, she will never leave you.....you know what I mean, Don't You? ? ?
Before she let me marry her, she made my promise to let her die before me. NOW I may never know WHEN i'm allowed to die, since she still (I suppose) is swimming 'the ocean blue'. : ( bri
Gee, PS, it's a TOTALLY true story. HONEST to Neptune! ! ! ! Thanks. Ok, I admit the story IS a little 'fishy'. : ))) bri
Kingsley, would you expect ANYTHING LESS from your friend 'eagle eye' bri? ? ? : )
Bri, Your strong urge to mary one more time emerged strongly to shape this imaginative poem. Well, listening to your wish soon your wife will return to her original form.... Good poem, Indeed, enjoyed every bit of it. Full *****
' to mary one more time ' Asim, I have never married a Mary, but maybe...... Of course your meant 'marry', not 'mary'. Right! ? I wouldn't mind (too much) marrying MORE WOMEN. It's the bothersome divorces I 'could do without'! ! bri : )
Of Course you 'loved it'. Anyone in their 'right mind' would love it! ! ! YOU R in 'your right mind', right? ? ? bri ;) thanks.
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7/29/2025 4:00:25 AM # 1.0.0
BRI'S LIE: MAYBE 'LIES' IS MORE TRUTHFUL, BUT MY CURRENT (NOT OCEAN CURRENT) IS FROM JAPAN. I was born near a large lake. I WAS ONLY ON TV ONCE, BUT IT WAS NOT COMFORTABLE SO i MOVED TO A COUCH.