She was born on the east coast of Japan, bordered by an Ocean.
She'd eaten plenty of Seafood, some raw, ......which she called Sushi.
And she was an accomplished Swimmer & often Swam in a pool, BUT
......it never dawned on me how CLOSE she might have felt/been to the 'Sea'.
Her feet, for a petite female, were Large, and she often rose on her Toes.
She had skin ailments, not quite 'Scaly', and Itching, often on her legs.
She at times had short hair; other times her hair was Long and it did Flow.
Was being a mermaid in her future her fate? The question begs.
Whether it had always been her Fate or not, I'll never know.
But I KNOW, while on vacation, into the Sea she did go.
She dove off a long pier. I didn't know what to do! ! !
I began to undress, starting with my L and R shoe.
I scanned the water's surface, but I saw Her not.
I did call 911. My heart Raced. I Worried too.
From my mind, 'I'm losing her', I did blot.
Then I heard her voice call: 'Dear, adieu'.
I heard far-off sirens. My tears began to flow.
I heard her call again, from whence the wind did blow.
Then I saw her swimming form, a naked female above her waist.
'Below' she looked like a fish, her skin scale-covered, her feet, by tail, replaced.
I never saw her after that. Officials in boats searched the waters with NO luck.
Tears sometimes return to my eyes, but then I try to console myself: 'It WAS her fate'....
I tell myself! Each year I return to that 'long pier' half-wishing I will see her or hear her call.
But, in this year's October, I'll be 'The Golden Bachelor' [on TV] searching for a 'newfound love'.
Seven years after my 'first love' disappeared [never found], a judge ruled her 'legally-dead'.
That cleared my way to try to find & marry a woman, one who's also lost her spouse.
Wish me 'Good Luck! ', please.
(October 6th, 2023)
bri edwards
:)
p.s. Only some of this story, near its beginning, is TRUE.
p.p.s. The Golden Bachelor is a TV program/show I've been watching.
The 'Golden Bachelor', the man, not an actor as far as I know, is very close to MY age,75.
BRI'S LIE: MAYBE 'LIES' IS MORE TRUTHFUL, BUT MY CURRENT (NOT OCEAN CURRENT) IS FROM JAPAN. I was born near a large lake. I WAS ONLY ON TV ONCE, BUT IT WAS NOT COMFORTABLE SO i MOVED TO A COUCH.
Geeta, thanks for your multiple comments. : ) bri Keep up the good work, TT. Hee hee!
Enjoyed reading your poem, dear friend Bri. it was very refreshing and absorbing too.
This is a very imaginative tale with a sad ending. It was like reading fairy tale story. Your wife's presence in the story made it interesting and sentimental too.
A very interesting and entertaining poem. Nice to know that some parts of your poem were inspired by your wife. Well crafted write.
Thanks for your reading and comment, Rose Marie. I was inspired before by my wife, but its title was similar to Don't Ever Call Your Wife Hitler. ; (
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Interesting and well crafted with humour
Kingsley, would you expect ANYTHING LESS from your friend 'eagle eye' bri? ? ? : )
Thanks, K.E. : )