Monday, December 5, 2016

My Wife Comments

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My wife
You are the essence of my life
My free space
Where no one could dare to trace
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Dr. Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek Mohammed
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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 August 2019

Ah so, this poem is dedicated to your wife MARRIAM, one of your four wives as I know now, according to your words. Donna is the one whom you like most or is it Marriam? Sorru that I ask, since these names are confusing me. As I can guess you live now with your latest (youngest) wife now. Is she Marriam or Donna? Thanks for any response.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 April 2018

Loveliest Tribute to a wife ever told, never pale, sometimes while reading I thought this could be also a Florence Nightingale. Frank and free magniificent Tribute, sweetest worded. Thank you for sharing. A 10++++++ for the vote

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Mj Lemon 25 January 2017

There is absolutely no finer treasure! A great poem, Ahmed.

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 25 January 2017

Thank you so much M.J. Lemon for sparing time to read and comment on my poem.

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 25 January 2017

Thanks M.J Lemon. Thank you so much.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 13 December 2016

A good poem and the poem pertaining to the dearest one to the poet is beautifully dedicated in such love, sympathy and all positiveness of the marital relation.

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 13 December 2016

Thank you man, thank you so much for commenting.

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 13 December 2016

Thank you Gangadharan for comment.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 December 2016

Wealth is inherited from parents but an ideal partner comes from God............... Nice poem, Dr. Ahmed...

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 13 December 2016

That is wisdom Bernard and good faith. Thank you so much.

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 13 December 2016

Thanks Bernard.

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Kelly Kurt 12 December 2016

You are indeed fortunate to have found such an ideal mate

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 12 December 2016

Kelly, how are you doing? Thank you for your comment. Can you spare some minutes to provide me with a critical reading for the poem?

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 December 2016

Please read expression instead of ecpression. It has been done inadvertently.

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 12 December 2016

Got it Kumamani. Thank you so much for your nice comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 December 2016

Each and every line reveals your deep love towards your wife. Thrilling ecpression. A fantastic poem has been shared. The most fascinating lines you have presented are... My wife You are my holy place Where I fully enjoy my peace And secure my soul When the dark moments roll over and roll Then my wife you are the wall My tall wall My safe wall Where to lean, when tired and sick of all You are my last resort before I fall. Thanks for sharing.10

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Wes Vogler 12 December 2016

I am so sorry that you were not able to marry the most beautiful woman in all the world and have the most beautiful children. They are mine

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 12 December 2016

Since retired and watching my children and grand-children develop character. My wife, Donna, is still leading me around on a short leash. Wes Volger So Donna is there. May Allah bless all of you with good health, wealth, time and happiness with your grand children. But about my wives, I am satisfied with this one, although my religion allow me four at the same time. Stay well, Wes.

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 December 2016

Nice dedication! For your wife. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 11 December 2016

Thanks Edward.

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Bharati Nayak 11 December 2016

Your love for your wife sparkle through every line of your poem.This feeling is so deep that she becomes a lovely song or a beautiful poem for you.You see poetry in your wife or feel poetry as having the attributes of a soul companion like your wife.Poetry is now as dear to you as your wife. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 11 December 2016

Thank you so much Bharati for you nice comments.

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Kim Barney 10 December 2016

Very nice. A beautiful tribute to your wife. I especially like this verse: You are my favourite song That I like to sing During all the seasons Winter, summer, fall and spring

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 10 December 2016

Thank you Kim for your comment. Thank you so much.

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Valsa George 10 December 2016

How proud, your wife must be on reading this! You are so very fortunate to get such a partner in life. Sure she too is very fortunate to get a husband who acknowledges all her merits and holds her so close to his heart! When husband -wife relations are getting strained and family ties are loosening, it is so nice to know that you are so thickly bonded in love! A beautiful poem!

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 10 December 2016

Dear Valsa You are always nice to me. Thank you so much for your comments.

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