My wife
You are the essence of my life
My free space
Where no one could dare to trace
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Loveliest Tribute to a wife ever told, never pale, sometimes while reading I thought this could be also a Florence Nightingale. Frank and free magniificent Tribute, sweetest worded. Thank you for sharing. A 10++++++ for the vote
Thank you so much M.J. Lemon for sparing time to read and comment on my poem.
A good poem and the poem pertaining to the dearest one to the poet is beautifully dedicated in such love, sympathy and all positiveness of the marital relation.
Wealth is inherited from parents but an ideal partner comes from God............... Nice poem, Dr. Ahmed...
Kelly, how are you doing? Thank you for your comment. Can you spare some minutes to provide me with a critical reading for the poem?
Please read expression instead of ecpression. It has been done inadvertently.
Each and every line reveals your deep love towards your wife. Thrilling ecpression. A fantastic poem has been shared. The most fascinating lines you have presented are... My wife You are my holy place Where I fully enjoy my peace And secure my soul When the dark moments roll over and roll Then my wife you are the wall My tall wall My safe wall Where to lean, when tired and sick of all You are my last resort before I fall. Thanks for sharing.10
I am so sorry that you were not able to marry the most beautiful woman in all the world and have the most beautiful children. They are mine
Since retired and watching my children and grand-children develop character. My wife, Donna, is still leading me around on a short leash. Wes Volger So Donna is there. May Allah bless all of you with good health, wealth, time and happiness with your grand children. But about my wives, I am satisfied with this one, although my religion allow me four at the same time. Stay well, Wes.
Nice dedication! For your wife. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Your love for your wife sparkle through every line of your poem.This feeling is so deep that she becomes a lovely song or a beautiful poem for you.You see poetry in your wife or feel poetry as having the attributes of a soul companion like your wife.Poetry is now as dear to you as your wife. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.
Very nice. A beautiful tribute to your wife. I especially like this verse: You are my favourite song That I like to sing During all the seasons Winter, summer, fall and spring
How proud, your wife must be on reading this! You are so very fortunate to get such a partner in life. Sure she too is very fortunate to get a husband who acknowledges all her merits and holds her so close to his heart! When husband -wife relations are getting strained and family ties are loosening, it is so nice to know that you are so thickly bonded in love! A beautiful poem!
Dear Valsa You are always nice to me. Thank you so much for your comments.
Ah so, this poem is dedicated to your wife MARRIAM, one of your four wives as I know now, according to your words. Donna is the one whom you like most or is it Marriam? Sorru that I ask, since these names are confusing me. As I can guess you live now with your latest (youngest) wife now. Is she Marriam or Donna? Thanks for any response.