My Whole World, You Comments

this is a beautiful poem of love for someone special. MY word your eyes, your world my arms.

really! very beautiful poem! i liked it very much!

Superb... pregnant words, emotionally charged.. Every word seems to be coming from the heart. Original thought, not that U forced urself to write. Here, the emotions find its way out and ur pen is used only as a medium.. The lines have a mesmerizing effect, anyone who reads it keeps reading till the end... One can get a glimpse like those of the Metaphysical poets. What I like about u is that U always create something out of nothing and poetry comes to u naturally... In true sense, I regard u the poet of beauty.

A very beautiful poem, like it.

Exquisitely worded romantic poem. Yor spouse shall luv it. My votes accept. Tell me do they show. U can read me too.

A beautiful love poem so intense and as deep as your love, wonderful write!

so beautiful, so much love.. a romantic at heart... if one day my jahan writes like this... he would capture my soul my being... love it RM

aww.....with each word my mind keep saying it...how sentimental each word full of charm each emotion within it enchanting and whimsical....beautiful just absolutely beautiful thank you so much for this wonderful piece sir love, payal