Sunday, February 26, 2017

My Wee Special Guest Comments

Rating: 5.0

It popped in as if to say hello
my birdie buddy all sweet and mellow
Dressed in a downy gold gown of yellow
I tried to cheep in tune, join its song to say
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Laurie Van Der Hart 06 March 2018

Such a refreshing poem and well-written. Very nice, Zaynab. I hope you write more like this one soon.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

This was in honour of your winged guest of honour. An amazing tweet poem is brilliantly and powerfully expressed here is really very interesting...10

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Bri Edwards 27 July 2017

i'll now use this in August 2017's showcase. i read it again and 'love' it again! ! bri ;)

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Tom Billsborough 04 July 2017

Another fab poem. Lovely yellow bird. We have mainly sparrows, very noisy and great to watch them scrabbling about like schoolchildren in packs

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Hans Vr 22 April 2017

Sweet, lovely, heart moving poem, Excellently written, a pleasure to read

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Muhammad Ali 04 March 2017

beautiful. poem from a beautiful mind. very nice composition sis.

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My Wee Special Guest birds are so special to me, too.Love your poems..

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Julie Smith 01 March 2017

This is so cute and really enchanting! [3

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Darwin Henry Beuning 28 February 2017

Very nice! ! ! I rate a 10.

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The Trumpoet 28 February 2017

Lovely poem - especially with the accompanying photos.

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Annette Aitken 28 February 2017

A lovely ode to your feathered friend and beauitfully written. Annette.

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Siddartha Montik 27 February 2017

Nice Poet... so sweet! thank you for sharing Poet!

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Unwritten Soul 26 February 2017

Nice poem with cheerful rhyme tweet tweet :)

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