Thursday, April 23, 2009

My Weapon Comments

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And so they ask how i protect my emotions, how i protect my feelings.
how i hold back tears of joy and vain,
And i would tell them,
my weapon is my ink, all i need to do is to think.
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salha kibwana
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Bob Blackwell 24 April 2009

Kee writing Salha you have a gift for it and it helps you cope.

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Barry A. Lanier 24 April 2009

loving the personification....'each page carries a lump of joy and a pint of pain'....how true to the poet....

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Ted Sheridan 23 April 2009

Be true to yourself. See beyond the obvious and write about it. Very good.

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Britney Hogue 23 April 2009

love this poem. it reflects the way i write. to free myself from unwanted emotions Britney

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salha kibwana

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