Thursday, January 9, 2020

My Weapon Is Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deaf and dumb and blind is the ancient nature,
Having only two instincts, to create and to destroy,
Very well I know my expectation is my caricature,
I can feel and think as I am a beautiful breathing toy,
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 January 2020

A man can conquer everything by the power of love. A wonderful poem beautifully crafted

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 January 2020

Poets do not love a poet they only their own poems compose on known poets shoulders and point out mainly grammar or typos this is the modern world I suppose

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Unwritten Soul 10 January 2020

The title itself speaks lovely than summarize whole thing here. but reading all make me feel even happier because how honest you are it convinced me, your weapon is love. At least no radiation as side effect (joking) .

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 January 2020

Sweetheart! Even if your existence is merely virtual, My weapon is love; I shall fight and make you real.

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 January 2020

the fantasy, the dreamy now true to life like; the infancy now to true youth; the love, yeah, the love now to your heart, to your mind, to your immortal soul none can slack it; none can defeat you from this coz- love is your true weapon on this earth...///

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Bri Edwards 09 January 2020

2 – at least you can " recollect" /'remember' the fantasies, even if you can no longer " have them" . does that make sense? i'm too old to know! " pink stain" ? lipstick stain? ? " atheist I never" maybe " never have" the last two lines are my favorites. :) bri :) To MyPoemList

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Bri Edwards 09 January 2020

1 – " heart is changed in gold" OR " ...to gold" ? I'm sure your 'heart' is precious to more than one person, maybe MANY! ! ! Very nice: " I recollect my ecstasies in love before I am dead, I smile my naughty and joyful youth when I am old, " [i'd say " smile at" ]

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